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There are many ways to make fire. One of the most common pathways is burning wood or using stoves. However, the soot of this sort of fire produces bad chemicals for the human breath.

In the history of the human being there are a lot of relevant facts to change habits and allow evolution of humans. The fire is one of them. When the men could control the fire, they started to be nomads. Since then, we use fire for different purposes. For example, they can get fire to keep warm houses in cold places, or to make some products in factories.

There are snow places in the world where persons need to burn wood in fireplaces or stoves to keep warming. North countries have weather freeze; the residents of these areas need to make fire because the low temperatures could cause hypothermia. In one hand they might use gas or electricity, but it would be very expensive. Therefore, they prefer to use wood of their own trees, it is cheaper and they obtain their same goals.

However, new researches about the particle’s soot develop that it contains bad chemicals to produce harm in the longs of the humans. Scientifics of this field can observing that these bad pieces in the air rising health breathing problems like asthma, lung fibrosis, cancer among others. For these reasons, mistery of health had been recommending that they can´t use wood to get fire when the particles in atmosphere pick up 65 micrograms per cubic meter. It occurs in pollution cities of the North Pole.

To avoid this air problem, the government applies a law against to burning wood in specific days, When the air pollution is higher.

In conclusion, the residents of some towns could be fined if they burning wood to maintain the air free of chemicals to harming the live.

Correction:

One of the most common pathways is burning wood or using stoves = One of the most common way  is  to burn wood or use stoves

In the history of the human being there are a lot of relevant facts to change habits and allow evolution of humans =In the history of the human being there have been  a lot of relevant facts to change habits and also allowed the evolution of humans

When the men could control the fire, they started to be nomads. =When the men could control the fire, they started to be  nomadic tribes .

we use fire for different purposes. = we have used fire for different purposes.

they can get fire to keep warm houses in cold places, or to make some products in factories. = One  can get fire to keep warm houses in cold places, or to make some products in factories.

 There are snow places in the world where persons need to burn wood in fireplaces or stoves to keep warming =There are snow places in the world where persons need to burn wood in fireplaces or stoves to keep them warm

North countries have weather freeze; = North countries have a cold weather ;

they obtain their same goals = they obtain the same goals

However, new researches about the particle’s soot develop that it contains bad chemicals to produce harm in the longs of the humans. = However, new researches developed about the particle’s soot indicates  that it contains bad chemicals which  harms lungs of  humans.

Scientifics of this field can observing = Scientists in this field  observe

that these bad pieces in the air rising health breathing problems like asthma,  = that these bad pieces in the air rise health breathing problems like asthma,

mistery of health had been recommending that they can´t use wood to get fire when the particles in atmosphere pick up 65 micrograms per cubic meter = Ministery of Health has been recommending  to use wood to get fire when the particles in the atmosphere pick up 65 micrograms per cubic meter

It occurs in pollution cities of the North Pole. = It occurs in polluted cities of the North Pole.

the government applies a law against to burning wood in specific days. = the government passed a law against it and stated in which  specific days must be burnt wood, when the air pollution is higher.

the residents of some towns could be fined if they burning wood to maintain the air free of chemicals to harming the live. = Residents of towns could be fined if they burn wood  as to maintain the air free of chemicals that  harm the life.

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