domingo, 25 de marzo de 2012

IETLS ESSAY - BAND 3- PREPARATION

Education is one of the most important aspects of a nation. Also, it represents a challenge for each education ministry. However, there are a lot of programs for students who want to be in an university school or many students aids to support them.

In each country, there are public schools and private schools, for example, in US there are universities as Harvard or Princeton as a private schools and military school as a public school. Thus, you can choose where do you can to go and how many money you have to do it. For this reason, there are different kind of schools with programs and budget for each preferences´ student. All this, engage to keep studying after bachelor degree.

On the other hand, there are many programs for people who have lower economic level and they need money to survive. For instance, students could work 20 hours per week. Other examples are some very smart or sport students with scholarship. With these pathways, the students might obtain a college degree.

In conclusion, every country has a lot of methods to stimulate to their residents to study at universities. Governments are very worry about the college degree of their persons. The education is a very important part of the human beings.


CORRECTION:
who want to be in an university school or many students aids to support them.  = who want to be in a university school or many  schoolarships to support them.

in US there are universities as Harvard or Princeton as a private schools and military school as a public school = in US there are universities like Harvard or Princeton which are private school and other like Military schools that are public ones.

Thus, you can choose where do you can to go and how many money you have to do it. = Thus you can choose where you can go and how much money you have to spend.

All this, engage to keep studying after bachelor degree = All this engages them in studying after the bachelor's degree.


every country has a lot of methods to stimulate to their residents to study at universities. = every country has a lot of methods to stimulate their residents to study at Universities.

 Governments are very worry about the college degree of their persons. =  Governments are very worry about the college's degree of their citizens 

education ministry = Ministry of Education

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